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Cmdrtako: Cmdrtako moved page YMO Story Arcs to WoMon:WoMon OnLine Story Arcs without leaving a redirect

2022-05-22T02:02:19Z

Cmdrtako moved page YMO Story Arcs to WoMon:WoMon OnLine Story Arcs without leaving a redirect

Cmdrtako at 15:45, 20 May 2022

2022-05-20T15:45:03Z

74.82.241.204: /* Don't want to live like a refugee */

2021-12-06T06:20:09Z

‎Don't want to live like a refugee

74.82.241.204: /* Don't want to live like a refugee */

2021-12-06T06:09:06Z

‎Don't want to live like a refugee

Cmdrtako at 13:17, 2 July 2021

2021-07-02T13:17:02Z

Cmdrtako at 11:20, 8 May 2021

2021-05-08T11:20:27Z

Cmdrtako at 11:20, 8 May 2021

2021-05-08T11:20:01Z

Cmdrtako: /* outline */ added how many screens the parts should have.

2021-04-26T14:03:00Z

‎outline: added how many screens the parts should have.

Cmdrtako: /* Prologue */ added story points

2021-04-15T14:51:56Z

‎Prologue: added story points

74.82.241.204: firewatch/they were 11 story arc

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firewatch/they were 11 story arc

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 ===Prologue===
 The working plot is that a scientist in World-0 invented interdimensional portal technology and used it to collect scientific and magical knowledge from the multiverse and being modest(or at least not greedy) and good nature slowly released the tech he found to his world so as not to cause too much of a disruption to society. but being a typical nerd he never found some to be with so he made his life a harem comedy with scratch build women.
-A selfish report find out about his secret harem of super women and writes a scandalous report that presented to the world that he had made mindless sex slaves with super human powers. That report causes him to be labeled as Sukebe and the world's governments to send a strike force to kill them all and steal his technologist for their own arms of mindless super soldiers. Sukebe is the only survivor of that attack and with the self-sacrifice of his last girl manages to keep his technology from following into irresponsible hands. He's driven a bit mad from the loss of his girls and seeks revenge against the world leaders and to replace the governments with ones that would never do a preemptive military strike on peaceful civilians.
+A selfish report find out about his secret harem of super women and writes a scandalous report that presented to the world that he had made mindless sex slaves with super human powers. That report causes him to be labeled as Sukebei and the world's governments to send a strike force to kill them all and steal his technologist for their own arms of mindless super soldiers. Sukebei is the only survivor of that attack and with the self-sacrifice of his last girl manages to keep his technology from following into irresponsible hands. He's driven a bit mad from the loss of his girls and seeks revenge against the world leaders and to replace the governments with ones that would never do a preemptive military strike on peaceful civilians.
 A government released a biological weapon to kill all the WoMon but it was only effective at giving them mild flu like systems; but it mutated into "The Bloody Flu" when it jumped species to human kind. The Bloody Flu isn't particularly fatal, but spreads very quickly and causes quite a mess.  it isn't until years later that the full extent of the Bloody Flu was determined. Sterility affects most of the women who had become infected.
-Some say the Sukebe had tricked a naïve schoolgirl, named Alessia, into accepting an operation so she could keep the war away from her hometown of Anchorage. It was little known that under it Sukebe had established his home base and thus had a need for a defender. Apparently, the weapon inside of her processed attack and defense on its own and the schoolgirl could only guide its actions, but not inhibit them. Guiding the weapon residing inside of her, she kept the city a demilitarized zone and, through the knowledge of this, over a million and a half refugees entered the city over the course of the war.
+Some say the Sukebei had tricked a naïve schoolgirl, named Alessia, into accepting an operation so she could keep the war away from her hometown of Anchorage. It was little known that under it Sukebei had established his home base and thus had a need for a defender. Apparently, the weapon inside of her processed attack and defense on its own and the schoolgirl could only guide its actions, but not inhibit them. Guiding the weapon residing inside of her, she kept the city a demilitarized zone and, through the knowledge of this, over a million and a half refugees entered the city over the course of the war.
-Unfortunately, Alessia was ultimately a pacifist and would not allow the troops to enter her city; thus, from being a 'little Switzerland', Her home city was relabeled as a top-priority target  even without the knowledge of Sukebe's base under it. The efforts to get past her had effectively killed millions of current inhabitants well before her ultimate defeat, with only her boyfriend and Sukebe himself surviving past her defeat. The diaries that she and her boyfriend kept, along with the letters they had written each other,  her boyfriend combined into one work in a hospital before dying of radiation poisoning, was published under the name "The Last Love Song on this Little Planet," and would soon surpass the bible as the highest selling book in history.
+Unfortunately, Alessia was ultimately a pacifist and would not allow the troops to enter her city; thus, from being a 'little Switzerland', Her home city was relabeled as a top-priority target  even without the knowledge of Sukebei's base under it. The efforts to get past her had effectively killed millions of current inhabitants well before her ultimate defeat, with only her boyfriend and Sukebei himself surviving past her defeat. The diaries that she and her boyfriend kept, along with the letters they had written each other,  her boyfriend combined into one work in a hospital before dying of radiation poisoning, was published under the name "The Last Love Song on this Little Planet," and would soon surpass the bible as the highest selling book in history.
 The Alessia Memorial on Iron Spire Island was dedicated to her unending efforts at keeping the civilian population safe, first from the Terror Troops and rebellious human militias, later from the overzealous Empires who were willing to sacrifice millions in order to defeat one. The Iron Spire jutting from the memorial almost a kilometre into the sky is not a sculpture: it is all that remained of her after her ultimate defeat, and the only known physical remains of any Legendary WoMon left to the world after their defeat.
-A soldier fighting against the feral WoMon left after Sukebe's disappearance, discovers that a Growlie he rescued from a bear trap has switched sides and is now *very* affectionate and loyal to him. This discovery leads to more members of that army experimenting and discovering that *some* of the attacking "monsters" could be turned against their brethren and become loyal if awfully lusty companions.
+A soldier fighting against the feral WoMon left after Sukebei's disappearance, discovers that a Growlie he rescued from a bear trap has switched sides and is now *very* affectionate and loyal to him. This discovery leads to more members of that army experimenting and discovering that *some* of the attacking "monsters" could be turned against their brethren and become loyal if awfully lusty companions.
 With the use of Taming techniques available, the tide begins turning as loyal WoMon fight in defense of their adoptive homes against the attackers. It is also discovered that WoMon are interfertile with humans and can produce human children or WoMon of the mother's type or both.
-The player starts off as one of the refugees in Anchorage during the final battle, What no one on World-0 but Sukebe knew was that the final attack on Anchorage would have shaken the world like a magnitude 10 earthquake.
+The player starts off as one of the refugees in Anchorage during the final battle, What no one on World-0 but Sukebei knew was that the final attack on Anchorage would have shaken the world like a magnitude 10 earthquake.
-Sukebe disappeared soon after the destruction of Anchorage as that attack and The Last Love Song on this Little Planet had finally gotten people say enough is enough with the  empires and replace them with something better. He went looking for Alessia trying to find out why she didn't return.
+Sukebei disappeared soon after the destruction of Anchorage as that attack and The Last Love Song on this Little Planet had finally gotten people say enough is enough with the  empires and replace them with something better. He went looking for Alessia trying to find out why she didn't return.
 He finally figured it out when found the following information:
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 Reports persist over the centuries of her engaging in titanic battles with several legendaries. Documented battles include one with Lugiass in 110 AS. Lugiass fled the battlefield in disarray. The one with Typhonna in 129AS took place on the surface of the moon and was fortunately recorded by an astronomer studying crater formation. According to visual records, the battle with Typhonna was a draw. Afterwards, both legendary WoMon vanished again.
-THE FOLLOWING IS CLASSIFIED SECURITY LEVEL OMEGA (NEED TO KNOW ONLY). Unauthorized persons in possession of this information will be subject to memory purge and possible execution. Professor Emilio Tanner, a WoMon Researcher from the Silver River League, contacted league officials in 168AS with some astounding information. Professor Tanner had been approached by none other than Evangelion who, in return for a taming, granted a brief interview. While Evangelion is a WoMon, she did not evolve from an Eva, or anything else for that matter. She was created on a different earth, by a different Sukebe. On this world, he had been accepted for his creations and WoMon had been designed to aid man. Here the legendaries protected mankind from outside threats, and Evangelion, being Celestial, somehow determined that humanity here needed her help more than the people on her world and came here to protect us from the machinations and assaults of the other legendaries.
+THE FOLLOWING IS CLASSIFIED SECURITY LEVEL OMEGA (NEED TO KNOW ONLY). Unauthorized persons in possession of this information will be subject to memory purge and possible execution. Professor Emilio Tanner, a WoMon Researcher from the Silver River League, contacted league officials in 168AS with some astounding information. Professor Tanner had been approached by none other than Evangelion who, in return for a taming, granted a brief interview. While Evangelion is a WoMon, she did not evolve from an Eva, or anything else for that matter. She was created on a different earth, by a different Sukebei. On this world, he had been accepted for his creations and WoMon had been designed to aid man. Here the legendaries protected mankind from outside threats, and Evangelion, being Celestial, somehow determined that humanity here needed her help more than the people on her world and came here to protect us from the machinations and assaults of the other legendaries.
 According to her, she is unable to involve herself in events that are purely human in nature, but if a legendary or other outside force is involved, she will act to keep humanity safe. Humans and WoMon working as the witting or unwitting agents of a legendary are fair targets. Unfortunately she feels that the world’s issues with Ferals are a result of the Old Empires' creation of the Red Plague and will not aid us at this time. Interestingly enough, when asked about Sanctuary, her response was that she was still evaluating the level of legendary involvement and had not yet determined whether her intercession was necessary.
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 Alessia had tried to divert the nuclear explosion into an uninhabited dimension but was too slow so the portal was still forming when the blasts went off.
-Most of the blast was successfully directed to the uninhabited dimension or used to power the transportation of all the inhabitants of Anchorage, except her boyfriend and Sukebe, into the multiverse. The remaining energy destroyed Anchorage in World-0 or followed  Alessia into World-1 where it destroyed an Australian sized continent, turning it into the Orange Islands.
+Most of the blast was successfully directed to the uninhabited dimension or used to power the transportation of all the inhabitants of Anchorage, except her boyfriend and Sukebei, into the multiverse. The remaining energy destroyed Anchorage in World-0 or followed  Alessia into World-1 where it destroyed an Australian sized continent, turning it into the Orange Islands.
-In the main world of the game Sukebe and the war are mythology the only 3 things everyone can agree upon: that Sukebe first created the WoMon, he didn't state the war, and that no one won it.
+In the main world of the game Sukebei and the war are mythology the only 3 things everyone can agree upon: that Sukebei first created the WoMon, he didn't state the war, and that no one won it.
 Thou "The Last Love Song on this Little Planet" is still found in as many houses as the bible is in our world.
 ==== outline ====
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 #You hears about the city of Anchorage and how Alessia keeps the war at bay from it.
 #You gather the will to head to Anchorage.
-#You're almost there when you attacked by those that don't want people to go to Anchorage they say stuff like "You can't escape war", "It's you duty to join us in the Genocide of the culture Sukebe make with his creations of sin.", and "If your not fighting for humanity you are fighting against humanity." and Alessia.
+#You're almost there when you attacked by those that don't want people to go to Anchorage they say stuff like "You can't escape war", "It's you duty to join us in the Genocide of the culture Sukebei make with his creations of sin.", and "If your not fighting for humanity you are fighting against humanity." and Alessia.
 #You listen to Alessia speech about how she doesn't want to fight and hating killing her enemies, she just want's us all to find a way to peacefully coexist with all of our differences.
 #lifes good in Anchorage (at least 50 lines when wrapped at 80 chars, approximately 755 words)
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 ##Alessia starts to form the dimensional gate and what will become the spires form and take their positions around Anchorage.
 ## the gate starts to form without any time to spare. The Bombers explode and the leave tears in the fabric of reality instead of massive creators.
-##Lilith Roxette evolves Trixie, an Eva, with an Angel Stone into [[Evangelion]] as that dimension has no [[Alessia(Legendary_WoMon)|Ultimate Defender Legendary]] of it's onw it connects to the one in the Closest dimension, Alessia(at least 50 lines when wrapped at 80 chars, approximately 755 words)
+##Lilith Roxette evolves Trixie, an Eva, with an Angel Stone into [[Evangelion(WoMon)]] as that dimension has no [[Alessia(Legendary_WoMon)|Ultimate Defender Legendary]] of it's onw it connects to the one in the Closest dimension, Alessia(at least 50 lines when wrapped at 80 chars, approximately 755 words)
 ##The sudden unexpected psychic contact breaks Alessia's concentration, her portal is redirected though the interdimensional conduit between Alessia and Trixie. Alessia can't let Trixie's world be destroyed in her world place so makes a [[Slide Wave]] to scatter the inhabitants of Anchorage randomly(Infinitive of Go) though out the time and space of the entire multiverse.(at least 50 lines when wrapped at 80 chars, approximately 755 words)

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 Intro and tutorial.
-You find a job working at a resort with a bunch of sexy waitresses.
+You're dropped into the mild of the wilderness by the Slide-Wave. You struggle to survive and lunkily it's only few days before you are found by a tamer and they teach you the basics of survival and the game Cambat&Exploration parts of the game.
-A mysterious stranger approaches you and offers you get you into the World-renowned Acadamy and give you a house and allowance inturn for spying on 3 sister's
+You find a job working at a resort with a bunch of sexy waitresses, teaching you about the parts of the Social simulation of the game.
 ===Not exactly "You're a wizard Harry"===

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 ===Don't want to live like a refugee===
 Intro and tutorial.
 ===Not exactly "You're a wizard Harry"===

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 ##The sudden unexpected psychic contact breaks Alessia's concentration, her portal is redirected though the interdimensional conduit between Alessia and Trixie. Alessia can't let Trixie's world be destroyed in her world place so makes a [[Slide Wave]] to scatter the inhabitants of Anchorage randomly(Infinitive of Go) though out the time and space of the entire multiverse.(at least 50 lines when wrapped at 80 chars, approximately 755 words)
-===finding your place in this strange but wonderous world===
+===Don't want to live like a refugee===
 Intro and tutorial.
-You arrive in World-1 and are put into The most Academy with the most prestigious WoMon Training program.
+===Not exactly "You're a wizard Harry"===
-====Firewatch/They Were Eleven====
+You arrive in World-1 and are put into The most Academy with
-You only contact with other people is watching the planes fire bomb the fires you report and your talks with your mentor/superviser which you only contact through a telephone line that you have to maintain 1 days travel worth. You know your message if they make it though the days worth of line will be storied and reviewed by your mentor but you don't know when or when they will try to contact you. You have to make routine reports but they don't have to reply and it's Intermittent reinforcement to reward it with a imdeniant response when it's done(never interrupted while you are making your report) and a conversation.
+A mysterious stranger comes up to you and offers to get you get you enrolled in The Academy, the most prestigious school in the WoMon world; give you a house; and an allowance in exchange for you befriending your new neighbors, the 3 daughts of the man who drove the stanger father to suicide when he was a child,  who also go to The Acadamey and spy on them to that ruin their lives in revange on their father for .
-You arrive when brake up is well in it's way, spring, summer, fall, winter, spring, summer, fall, winter, then you leave on he day before the first day of spring.
+So you have to hide the fact that you're not really qualified to attend and have to sneak and get the dirt on the sisters and find out there darkest fears to the that stranger can make them a reality.
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 ====Being the Hermione====
 Be the real hero in Harry Potteresque epic plot at the academy.
 the evil is a pure strain humanist(those that thick everyone with WoMon ancestry should serve those that have none)

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 And so it happened that Bhai Kanhaiya became the first of the Wholly Marines.
-===Only Shooting Stars wake up Cthulhu==
+===Only Shooting Stars wake up Cthulhu===
 A world famous marksman gets goes up against a plot to raise a demon when the cult seeking the notebook of his grandfather. That has the calculations of when the meteor shower that is named after him will appear; information needed so that they have preform the ceremony to summon the demon.

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	And so it happened that Bhai Kanhaiya became the first of the Wholly Marines.		And so it happened that Bhai Kanhaiya became the first of the Wholly Marines.
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		+	===Only Shooting Stars wake up Cthulhu==
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		+	A world famous marksman gets goes up against a plot to raise a demon when the cult seeking the notebook of his grandfather. That has the calculations of when the meteor shower that is named after him will appear; information needed so that they have preform the ceremony to summon the demon.
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		+	The hero stops the ritual just in the nick of time!
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		+	Only it turns out is was all a ploy by the cultist to lure the marksman to ritual to complete it. For the marksman is the 'shooting star' needed to raise the demon.

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 Thou "The Last Love Song on this Little Planet" is still found in as many houses as the bible is in our world.
 ==== outline ====
-#You are struggling with the violence of war.
+#You are struggling with the violence of war.(at least 50 lines when wrapped at 80 chars, approximately 755 words)
 #You hears about the city of Anchorage and how Alessia keeps the war at bay from it.
 #You gather the will to head to Anchorage.
 #You're almost there when you attacked by those that don't want people to go to Anchorage they say stuff like "You can't escape war", "It's you duty to join us in the Genocide of the culture Sukebe make with his creations of sin.", and "If your not fighting for humanity you are fighting against humanity." and Alessia.
 #You listen to Alessia speech about how she doesn't want to fight and hating killing her enemies, she just want's us all to find a way to peacefully coexist with all of our differences.
-#lifes good in Ancgorage
+#lifes good in Anchorage (at least 50 lines when wrapped at 80 chars, approximately 755 words)
 #the final attack.
-##Alessia once again defends Anchorage
+##Alessia once again defends Anchorage(at least 25 lines when wrapped at 80 chars, approximately 377 words)
 ##this fight seems different, attacks are getting past Alessia and while the core of Anchorage is safe shells, missiles get past the outskirts into area though safe.
 ##Alessia goes at it full, she no longer waits for the units to attack first, or aim to F-kill but attacks every enemy of sight to permanently remove them for the war. and the World Govs fight back
-##The fight seems like it will never end.
+##The fight seems like it will never end.(at least 50 lines when wrapped at 80 chars, approximately 755 words)
 ##the bombers with their squadrons of escort fighters approaches.
-##Alessia realizes the the escort fighters are Ablative Armor for the bombers. She refuses to take the lives of those of suicide missions so ends her policy to destroy on sight and instead tries to blast a hole through the squadrons to minimize the lost of fighters while destroying the bombers.
+##Alessia realizes the the escort fighters are Ablative Armor for the bombers. She refuses to take the lives of those of suicide missions so ends her policy to destroy on sight and instead tries to blast a hole through the squadrons to minimize the lost of fighters while destroying the bombers.(atleast 25 lines when wrapped at 80 chars, approximately 377 words)
 ##With her new policy the Tide quickly turns against Alessia and the bombers fly into the heart of Anchorage.
 ##The World Gov launch the ICBMs to cumulate with the final bombing run on Anchorage.
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 ##Alessia starts to form the dimensional gate and what will become the spires form and take their positions around Anchorage.
 ## the gate starts to form without any time to spare. The Bombers explode and the leave tears in the fabric of reality instead of massive creators.
-##Lilith Roxette evolves Trixie, an Eva, with an Angel Stone into [[Evangelion]] as that dimension has no [[Alessia(Legendary_WoMon)|Ultimate Defender Legendary]] of it's onw it connects to the one in the Closest dimension, Alessia
+##Lilith Roxette evolves Trixie, an Eva, with an Angel Stone into [[Evangelion]] as that dimension has no [[Alessia(Legendary_WoMon)|Ultimate Defender Legendary]] of it's onw it connects to the one in the Closest dimension, Alessia(at least 50 lines when wrapped at 80 chars, approximately 755 words)
-##The sudden unexpected psychic contact breaks Alessia's concentration, her portal is redirected though the interdimensional conduit between Alessia and Trixie. Alessia can't let Trixie's world be destroyed in her world place so makes a [[Slide Wave]] to scatter the inhabitants of Anchorage randomly(Infinitive of Go) though out the time and space of the entire multiverse.
+##The sudden unexpected psychic contact breaks Alessia's concentration, her portal is redirected though the interdimensional conduit between Alessia and Trixie. Alessia can't let Trixie's world be destroyed in her world place so makes a [[Slide Wave]] to scatter the inhabitants of Anchorage randomly(Infinitive of Go) though out the time and space of the entire multiverse.(at least 50 lines when wrapped at 80 chars, approximately 755 words)
 ===finding your place in this strange but wonderous world===